Week 10 Story: The Eighth Son
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All who knew Gria and Rahim were envious of their relationship. They seemed very happy with one another, and they were joyful for a time. But, shortly after Gria became pregnant with their first child, she seemed grave. She did not eat or sleep. Many thought it was due to a bad pregnancy. In fact, the child was stillborn. After this, Gria’s mood seemed to return to normal. Rahim was upset about losing the baby, but he was happy that he had his wife back. Many months after this, Gria became pregnant again. Once more, her mood plummeted and the child was born dead.
This cycle repeated for seven children total. Gria recovered fully after each loss, but Rahim grew more tired and depressed. He could not understand how his wife was so unaffected. After all, she was the one who carried the children inside of her for months.
When Gria became pregnant for an eighth time, Rahim was determined not to lose the child. He consulted with the best doctors about what would be best for his wife. He did everything he could for her to make sure the pregnancy was easy. He wanted to hire an experienced midwife to help with delivery, but Gria insisted that she must do it on her own. Rahim was so invested in this baby, he spoke with the child and felt the baby’s kicks through Gria’s stomach every day. Even the morning of Gria’s labor, he saw the life moving inside of her.
While she gave birth, Rahim stood watch right outside the door. Gria would not let him come inside to watch her deliver. He listened intently and worried for his wife and child. But then he heard the shrill cry of an infant followed immediately by a gurgle. He burst through the doors to meet his child, but found his wife trying to submerge the baby in a bucket of water. Gria’s head jerked up at her husband’s entrance, knowing she was caught, but continued with the horrible deed. Rahim rushed over, screaming and crying, pulling the infant from Gria’s hands in the water.
The baby boy coughed a moment and resumed crying loudly. Gria’s eyes were dead as she looked at her son. When Rahim asked her how she could do such a thing to her baby, she responded that she’d done it to the seven before as well. He took a step back from her, stunned. She looked him in the eyes, but their usual sparkle was gone. She said that when they first met, she was told a prophecy that she would birth her husband’s murderer. She paid no regard to this until she became pregnant. It weighed on her mind for nine months and she had never ending nightmares of the life inside her killing Rahim.
When the baby was finally born, she expected to feel love and excitement, but she felt nothing. She knew that this must mean the prophecy was true and there was evil in the babe. So, she drowned the child and no one knew it had survived birth. Each time she became pregnant, she dreaded having to commit the murder. Rahim asked why she did not tell him. She said she knew he would not believe her. She could see it in his eyes at this moment that he did not believe the prophecy.
After this, Rahim sent Gria away. He could not live with her after her actions and deceit. He raised his only son on his own and the boy grew to be Rahim’s pride and joy. Never did he bear ill will against Rahim. The boy eventually married and gave his father some grandchildren to enjoy, since he did not have many babies of his own to celebrate and love.
All who knew Gria and Rahim were envious of their relationship. They seemed very happy with one another, and they were joyful for a time. But, shortly after Gria became pregnant with their first child, she seemed grave. She did not eat or sleep. Many thought it was due to a bad pregnancy. In fact, the child was stillborn. After this, Gria’s mood seemed to return to normal. Rahim was upset about losing the baby, but he was happy that he had his wife back. Many months after this, Gria became pregnant again. Once more, her mood plummeted and the child was born dead.
This cycle repeated for seven children total. Gria recovered fully after each loss, but Rahim grew more tired and depressed. He could not understand how his wife was so unaffected. After all, she was the one who carried the children inside of her for months.
When Gria became pregnant for an eighth time, Rahim was determined not to lose the child. He consulted with the best doctors about what would be best for his wife. He did everything he could for her to make sure the pregnancy was easy. He wanted to hire an experienced midwife to help with delivery, but Gria insisted that she must do it on her own. Rahim was so invested in this baby, he spoke with the child and felt the baby’s kicks through Gria’s stomach every day. Even the morning of Gria’s labor, he saw the life moving inside of her.
While she gave birth, Rahim stood watch right outside the door. Gria would not let him come inside to watch her deliver. He listened intently and worried for his wife and child. But then he heard the shrill cry of an infant followed immediately by a gurgle. He burst through the doors to meet his child, but found his wife trying to submerge the baby in a bucket of water. Gria’s head jerked up at her husband’s entrance, knowing she was caught, but continued with the horrible deed. Rahim rushed over, screaming and crying, pulling the infant from Gria’s hands in the water.
The baby boy coughed a moment and resumed crying loudly. Gria’s eyes were dead as she looked at her son. When Rahim asked her how she could do such a thing to her baby, she responded that she’d done it to the seven before as well. He took a step back from her, stunned. She looked him in the eyes, but their usual sparkle was gone. She said that when they first met, she was told a prophecy that she would birth her husband’s murderer. She paid no regard to this until she became pregnant. It weighed on her mind for nine months and she had never ending nightmares of the life inside her killing Rahim.
When the baby was finally born, she expected to feel love and excitement, but she felt nothing. She knew that this must mean the prophecy was true and there was evil in the babe. So, she drowned the child and no one knew it had survived birth. Each time she became pregnant, she dreaded having to commit the murder. Rahim asked why she did not tell him. She said she knew he would not believe her. She could see it in his eyes at this moment that he did not believe the prophecy.
After this, Rahim sent Gria away. He could not live with her after her actions and deceit. He raised his only son on his own and the boy grew to be Rahim’s pride and joy. Never did he bear ill will against Rahim. The boy eventually married and gave his father some grandchildren to enjoy, since he did not have many babies of his own to celebrate and love.
Author's Note:
For this story, I combined pieces of two different stories. In the Mahabharata, there is a story about King Shantanu and Ganga where Ganga makes the king promise her he won't ever question her. He agrees and they're married, but every time she has a child, she drowns it in the river. The king says nothing for the first seven infants, but he rescues the eighth child and tells Ganga it's enough. She says the babies were celestial beings cursed to spend a life in a human body, and she was doing them a favor by helping them return to their celestial forms quickly. Ganga ends up letting King Shantanu have the eighth child, but then leaves him. The second story is about Krishna's birth. King Kamsa was told a prophesy that his sister's eighth child would kill him, so he locked his sister up in a dungeon with her husband. He killed each of her children immediately after they were born. When the eighth child was born, it was smuggled out. The child grew up to be Krishna and came back to kill King Kamsa years later.
It was crazy to me that both of these stories involved the murder of seven infants and the miraculous saving of the eighth child. So, I pulled the good intentions and loving relationship from the first story and the idea of a prophecy from the second. But in my story, the prophesy was false. Gria's worry and what could have been postpartum depression caused her to believe it anyways.
Bibliography:
"King Shantanu and Ganga" from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie (1913)
"Kamsa" from Krishna by Epified
Image Information: Pregnant Woman, Source: Pixabay
Bibliography:
"King Shantanu and Ganga" from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie (1913)
"Kamsa" from Krishna by Epified
Image Information: Pregnant Woman, Source: Pixabay
Seeing as I am the first to comment on your story.. Great job!! I think it is really creative that you combined parts of two different stories to create your own. Very original. I thought this story was well written and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Great job and keep up the goof work!
ReplyDeleteHi Casey, I really enjoyed reading this story! It think it's cool how you combined two different stories into one. There was so much suspense in this story. I was surprised when I read that the mother had been killing her children and lying to her husband but also suspected it as well. I like how the son did not end up killing Rahmin like Griia thought. It was cruel of Gria to do what she did but she was protecting her husband. It was a little fishy how she didn't want to deliver her baby with her husband around. I noticed you wrote "she was told a prophecy..." and I think it would make more sense to says "she was told by a prophet that..."
ReplyDeleteYour story was very good and I look forward to reading more!