Week 11 Story: The King and the Deer

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        There was once a king who very much enjoyed hunting. He spent many days in the forests and wilderness of his kingdom. On one occasion, he spotted a particularly large and beautiful deer. His heart was dead set on conquering the creature. The king urged his horse faster and faster, racing after the deer beyond his companions. At the very last moment, the king saw a chasm ahead and yanked the reins. He and his horse skidded to a halt just before falling over the cliff. The deer had not been so lucky and laid at the bottom, still alive but gravely injured.
        The king looked down at the creature he had been determined to kill, and his heart broke. He could not kill the animal now that it had been wounded. It wouldn’t be proper sport since he had an unfair advantage. But he also couldn’t leave the animal to die there. So, he called for his men who had lagged behind. Together, they climbed down into the ravine and pulled the deer out. It had a few gashes on its body and a broken leg or two, but it would live. The king had the deer brought back to his palace where it was cared for by the gentlest hands and watched over by the king himself. 



        Each day, the king would sit and read under a tree in the gardens where the deer was kept. Over time, the deer became more trusting and would approach the king and sit beside him. It seemed that they were both content to have the company of one another. Sometimes the king would quietly read aloud from his book and the deer’s ear would perk up and point in his direction.
        Eventually, the deer was well enough to return to the wild and the king said his goodbyes and shed a tear. The next day, he did not know what to do with himself after lunchtime. For months, he had spent this time with the healing deer, reading. So, he took a book to sit under the tree alone. Moments later, he heard leaves rustling and looked up to find the deer waiting outside the gates of the garden. The king opened the gate and his deer friend sat beside him while he read. And when he was done, the deer returned to the forest. The two continued this routine for years until the deer was old and slow. And then, one day, the deer took a nap beside the reading king, but did not ever wake. The king never hunted an animal again, because he could not bring himself to hurt another creature after seeing the life and personality of the deer.



Author's Note: 
        In the original story, a king is hunting a deer and they come upon a chasm. The deer is able to jump over the rift, but the king falls in and is injured. The deer climbs down and helps the king out. The king, of course, is very thankful and offers the deer anything he wants. The deer asks that neither the king nor his subjects hunt in the forest any longer. He agrees and everyone lives happily every after. 
        I wanted to switch the roles here so that the king saves the deer. I incorporated the reading to the deer to show the trust and relationship between the man and deer without the deer having to talk. I wanted this to be slightly more realistic than the original. I was hoping the king and deer could grow old together, but apparently the deer lifespan is not that long :( I did keep the concept of the king ending the hunting, but I wanted it to be his own decision and not something he owed or did as a favor.

Bibliography:
"The Sarabha" from Twenty Jataka Tales by Noor Inayat

Image Information: Deer, Source: Pixabay

Comments

  1. Hello again Casey! I enjoyed reading another one of your stories as always. That poor deer! I'm glad the King didn't kill it and had some compassion and helped the injured deer. It's so sad that the deer died of old age but I'm glad it passed away by the King and peacefully at that. It was bittersweet. I liked how descriptive your story was. I don't think I've read that story since I'm reading Krishna but it sounds very interesting. Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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  2. Hey Casey! This is a wonderful and heartfelt story. I found it very interesting how the King managed to change is mind about hunting the dear. However, this one act of kindness from the king evolved into a lifelong friendship and an evolution of respect between the king and the dear. I also love how, in a way, the dear's temporary pain resulted in the unintended safety of all the animals in the forest.

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  3. I recently went vegetarian so obviously this story hits me right in the feels! I remember over time since I had my cat Coco, I became less and less interested in eating meat. I kept imagining cows and chickens and turkeys looking up at me the way my cat does, getting scratches behind their ears...it got harder to deal with but I didn’t want to commit to something I couldn’t keep up so I just kind of tapered off and eventually realized it was sustainable so here we are!
    Thanks for the charming story.

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  4. Hi Casey! I love a happy story about people learning to be kind to animals, and the relationship you developed between the King and the deer was very beautiful. The deer and the king both learn to care for each other, and they build a bond that lasts a lifetime. Good job at tugging at the heartstrings, and I hope I can read more of your writing!

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  5. Hey there Casey! I really like how you wrote this story and changed some changed some major event. Like the King who went to hunt the deer end up helping the deer get out from the rift. It was a really touching story when a man helps an animal and not kills the pitiful animal. I personally like this part because I am vegetarian and been vegetarian since I was born so I think the story was interesting.

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